
How do we help our children learn to write down their thoughts? What should we expect as our students transition from oral to written narration? Join us today on the podcast as we look at composition in Form 2, grades 4 through 6.
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Emily
Welcome to A Delectable Education, the podcast that spreads the feast of the Charlotte Mason Method. I’m Emily Kiser and I’m here with…
Liz
…Liz Cottrill…
Nicole
…and Nicole Williams.
Emily
Well, we don’t give formal Composition lessons or instruction in Form 2. The students are developing their skills all the same. So Nicole, would you share what type of compositions they do at this level?
Nicole
Yeah. So they’re still narrating every lesson, but some of those narrations are recorded in writing. And it’s the type of things that are changing at this time. They’re still narrating every lesson. Just be very clear there. And it’s still coming from all of their sources. But now they could be asked to write in verse sometimes.
Emily
A narration in verse.
Nicole
In verse.
Emily
Like, poetry.
Nicole
Yes. And sometimes even in the meter of a poem that they have been, like a poet that they’ve been studying that term. So it’s not just any poem. And just to note, no formal poetry writing is taught. There’s some things in Form 3, but not at this level.
The written narrations, though, in Form 2 can take on some fresh forms. We see them being asked to write a story on a scene from Shakespeare or a historical figure or a story from something they’ve read in the newspaper because they are reading current events, right?
They can be asked to write descriptive pieces from their nature walks or seasonal observations. They can be asked to write letters. These can be personal notes to friends or family, invitations or thank you notes. And like I said, the verse sometimes.
So this is also where recitation, dictation and grammar, really begin to shape the child’s written work. They’ve really been practicing all these other things in other lessons, you know, specific lessons. And now they’re able to put those to use in some of these things. I really think it’s fun that they learn some very practical skills at this time, like letter writing, you would have to learn how to address the envelope and things like that. So yeah, this is the time for that.
Emily
Well, the lesson format, again, there’s no separate Composition lesson in Form 2 on the timetable. So all their composition work is happening within their other lessons. In Form 2B, which is again, 4th grade, beginning of Form 2, they’re expected to write one narration per day. And in 2A, 5th and 6th grades, they were to write two narrations per day. Now, I will say, in Form 2, I don’t think there’s ever a day in our schedule where there’s four..that we see in Charlotte Mason’s timetables that we have where there are more than three books. So they’re writing their narrations maybe on all of their book work for the day or two out of three books.
And this is as we’ve seen, and you keep saying even the story on the historical figure, well that’s a narration from their history, right? This is the bulk of their composition work. But for writing letters or sometimes poems on like a seasonal topic or whatever they might be asked to do, I have personally used some of their writing lessons, which is like handwriting most days, but I have them work on that during that. That’s how I’ve incorporated some of those other topics that we see come up on the programs.
But they can narrate their Literature or History written as a poem, right? Sometimes Charlotte Mason tells them they weren’t asked to do it. They just did it because they are taking in all this poetry and that just naturally is what they want to come out.
But for lessons that will have a written narration, we must allow ample time. Like normally we maybe could read 20 out of the 30 minutes and then save 10 minutes for narration and discussion. With writing, we need a lot more time. And as we’ve looked at the amount of work that Charlotte Mason assigned and then we compare that to the length of the lessons that they had on the timetable. We see that at most, if we spread out all that reading over the term for those 11 weeks, the reading would usually take no more than half the lesson time. So that’s kind of a good rule of thumb. If they need more time, they’re going to be reading fewer pages. And actually, I think we see this when we add up the pages that they read. There’s actually a step back from page count in higher forms because they’re spending so much time writing.
So as students transition to written narrations, they can always – also, whatever that looks like for your children, and maybe you have a child who is not a fluent reader, and so the writing is kind of behind that, whenever they make that transition to written narrations, we can ask them to write a part and then tell the rest. Because really, even if they’re not narrating the entirety of their passage, just the thought of going through and sorting out what can I write? Because my son, my oldest, when he started written narrations, was giving one sentence and it was the most comprehensive yet very concise sentence that he could manage. That is a really good writing skill to take a whole thing and he’s getting the gist of it, but then I’d be like okay can you tell me a little bit more? and he would narrate some more orally.
So we should not be discouraged at what looks like a regression in their narration abilities, when they get to this age. The skills that they use to select even those concise paragraphs or phrases and arrange them and hold them in their mind while their hand is laboriously writing them out are really the same things. They’re still accomplishing the learning that narration affords.
So our objectives are the same as in Form 1. We want to allow children to tell what they know. We want to increase their attention and their imagination and to develop their writing skills now is a new objective by exposing them to many different voices. Their writing is actually becoming written down at this point.
So our teacher prep, it’s such a relief after we’ve given you lots of other things to prep, but using narration allows children to harness and perfect their own natural abilities and by narrating from excellent books we eliminate the roadblock to composition of coming up with what do I need to say, what do I need to talk about? Charlotte Mason said it is our business to provide children with material in their lessons and then leave the handling of such material to themselves.
We do have a resource at this level. Actually a friend of ours, Morgan, has compiled a Composition Planner. This looks at all of the types of writing Nicole just gave you a snapshot of, but then some specific prompts that were taken from Charlotte Mason with some ideas of what we might do today in our situation.
Nicole
That’s helpful when you’re in the middle of lessons and you were like, Hmm, I’m supposed to do something a little unique here. What does that look like?
Emily
Yeah. And then of course, all you need for written narrations is paper and a pencil, and that could look like a spiral notebook. It could look like loose leaf paper in a binder. It could look like a journal. There’s no need to separate– I’m just trying to answer some of these questions about these nitty gritty details. But you don’t need to separate narrations by subject or anything. They can all be together in one book.
Liz
And you can just put the date and the subject, and they could write on the next clean page.
And the fact is, this is an essential skill because we do have to write sometimes in our life, but they’re already adept at the speaking part. I get so many questions. Moms, you know, my child can barely write. They don’t know how to spell. They haven’t really had grammar and they’re worried about punctuation. All the little details that we remember teachers marking our papers up with. And I think it’s first of all to note that in Form 1 they have Transcription so they have been learning some of those rules, and you’ll be surprised at what comes out that you didn’t realize they had assimilated right.
Emily
Quotation marks, capital letters.
Liz
Right. So I guess this is kind of the warning to parents is to not evaluate all those little details so much. My goodness, they’re just beginning. It’s a daunting task to a child to have a blank piece of paper. It’s a daunting task for me to have a blank screen when I have to write. So I think one of the best things you can do for your child is to be sympathetic. Let them off the hook about a lot of those picky details. They will be working on all those skills in the mechanics, like Nicole said. And I always say, so you can disagree with me about this, but my understanding from the programs was they had to have at least 10 minutes for the writing of their written narrations.
Emily
I don’t think we ever see a time like that. We’ve only come up with it based on…
Liz
But basically, if a lesson is 20 minutes, that is giving them half the time, you know. And so I guess what I’m saying, though, is it’s good for the child to know a time limit. So I get asked a lot, well, how long should they be? How many words should they be writing at this age and so on?
Emily
And that’s what we’re used to from our school is like you had to write a paragraph. I want you to write seven sentences, however many words.
Liz
Yeah. And so I think just like with lesson times being set, I think that having a set writing time is helpful to the child to know what…that’s the parameter, not how much they get written. I’ve never seen anywhere where she outlines they have to write this many words. So I think that that just helps us to relax a little bit, but they do have to write for that whole time.
Emily
And if you think about it, some authors like Charles Dickens are very verbose and some authors like Hemingway are not, you know?
Liz
The time limit I think helps them to realize this is not going to be an endless, unendurable thing, like there will come to an end. And just encourage them; kids just sit there and they don’t know what to write. The first word is the hardest, right? So maybe what is helpful is to just say, well, what would you tell me if you were giving a regular narration? If you could only say one thing about this whole thing you just read, what would it be? Or what are the two most important things? Just help them to…because this is what they’re really learning is how to be concise, which is what writing requires. So that’s why they have the time limit, because writing is much, much slower.
And then if they have extra time in that time limit that you’ve set, and they’ve already written down two things, they will tell some other things that would help people understand more details or something. So they shouldn’t be allowed, I guess is what I’m saying, to just write, scribble down a couple things and say, OK, I’m done. It’s like, no, you need to use up this time.
And I think it’s good for us to remember sympathetically, because moms ask me all the time, should I correct all the things they’ve done wrong and hand it back to them? Absolutely not. We don’t correct the oral narrations that way. And if you think about it, writing is an area when people criticize it that is the most threatening thing to most of us. It’s a hard area to be corrected in. And it’s going to take some restraint on your part. But I always say keep a note of all the words you see misspelled and all the grammar problems they’re having and you can address those in those subjects.
Emily
Yeah, sometimes if that’s too tempting for you, you can, I will just have my son read it out loud and they notice, they, you know, things that they left out.
Liz
Or if their handwriting is really sloppy.
Emily
Yeah, but or like sometimes I do this still, you know, you’re writing and your mind is thinking faster and you skip over words, right? And so that has been helpful to have him read them aloud to me.
Liz
And the other thing is, you know, a lot of kids want to spell correctly, they just don’t know all the words yet. And so I always want my children to just ask me how to spell something and if I’m in the middle of another lesson, it’s just a matter of reaching over and writing it on the board while you’re still dealing with the other child. And so they can see it and take it in themselves.
Emily
Yeah, that’s usually how we start because they’re very unsure if they’re spelling. I think that’s been the biggest hard roadblock for my sons. And so I will just take…they finish reading aloud to me or, whatever they might come to me and then my second son just hands me the whiteboard and I’m like what words do you need? And it’s like he’s already formulated what he wants to write and I’m writing down the words he’s unsure about and I’m like well this is still the mechanics; that’s just a helpful transition.
Liz
And then I think the other thing is but my child can’t read yet or they’ve just barely are able to write their alphabet, which is true of a lot of kids going to fourth grade. So if they’re still not reading just have them give you their own narration but you write it out in longhand, which is going to be a lot slower than when they just give a regular oral narration, right?
Emily
So they’re still having to hold their thoughts in their mind.
Liz
And so they’re learning that process, that writing is a much slower process. They’re going to have to slow down. But it is one day going to help them become a really good, concise writer, which is something most teachers have to work really hard with kids to be.
Moms want to help, especially if you’ve had a child who’s been slow to read and write, and all of a sudden they’re in this form and they must do it. Just her usual caution to the teacher is don’t do the work of the child’s education for them. They need to put forth the effort. You can encourage them, but don’t coach them what to write down, know, because that can be a temptation. Don’t do their thinking and their writing for them. Can you guys think of any other common…?
Nicole
I’ve just taken the calling Form 2 “the messy middle”. It feels like it is such a time of transition…such a time of transition and it is so important that we help our children or allow our children to make that transition because it’s vital that on the other side of this, you know, starting Form 3, that they’re going to be ready to do the things that are going to be asked of them at that point.
Liz
Right, but helping them is not dictating to them and they’re copying it down. Or writing it out for them and then they copy it from your writing. That is the very opposite of what they need to be doing.
Emily
You’ll find links in our show notes to all the resources we mentioned in today’s episode. We invite you to read along with us and join us next time for Composition in Forms 3-4, which is Grades 7-9, as we discuss some other aspects of the feast that helps our students develop their compositional prowess. Thanks for listening today as we continue to spread the feast of the Charlotte Mason Method.








